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Wanna be perfect
Wanna get good grades
How long can I put on this big charade?
Wanna make everyone happy
Want everyone like me
How come they can't see?
Wanna be perfect
Wanna be the best
How long until I protest?
Have to make them amazed
Have to make them all awed
Why can't they just let me be flawed?
How come they just can't relate?
When I make a mistake.
©2007-2009 ~Siguiriya
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This poem is about how people who expect too much of you should just shut the fuck up and leave you alone.

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:iconn1starwarsfan:
Words are better left for unspoken consent.

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Quit, don't quit. Noodles, don't noodles. You are too concerned.
Just remember, the past is history, the future is a mystery, but today is a gift.

That is why it is called present.

~Master Oogway
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Wow, this is really nice. It's also very spot-on when concerning the human nature. Believe me, I can relate to this. I mean, why can't some people see that I can't live up to every one of their expectations? Very good ^^

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Avatar by: =TenshiBakaNeko :glomp:
:iconsiguiriya:
I'm sorry please explain ur comment a little more.

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The truest part of the word BELIEVE is the LIE
:iconsiguiriya:
Thanx alot tis cool u get it I wasn't sure if any1 would.

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The truest part of the word BELIEVE is the LIE
:iconfmaxfreakx586:
You're welcome, and don't worry, I'm sure a lot of people understand ^__^

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Avatar by: =TenshiBakaNeko :glomp:
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wow.
you know, you cant always make people happy. you should just do what right for you and not anyone else.
i'm sure LOTS of people relate to this.
nice job my friend :)

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"The melody of logic always plays the notes of truth"~ Spiral

"...and the life of man, solitary, poor, nasty, brutish and short."~Leviathan
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I was more talking about an individual. COUGH. Guess who?

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The truest part of the word BELIEVE is the LIE
:iconn1starwarsfan:
When I opened up this page, the first thing that came to my mind was the fact that this poem mirrors my current situation...

**I like your poem**

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Quit, don't quit. Noodles, don't noodles. You are too concerned.
Just remember, the past is history, the future is a mystery, but today is a gift.

That is why it is called present.

~Master Oogway

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